There's a song I like by Kevin Sharp and in it, he says 'this is shallow water, baby'. That's what a rough draft is. Shallow water. When we edit we dig deeper, we wade out further to find what's swimming just beneath the surface.
Sometimes I can see the treasures glistening in one of my unedited manuscripts and sometimes all I can see is the murky bottom, but I'm still trying.
Wednesday, October 21, 2009
Shallow Water
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Labels: editing, fiction writing, Kevin Sharp, shallow water
Thursday, September 10, 2009
Teenage Writers
Writing is a rough road for even the most prolific adult. Learning the ropes can be a difficult, up a steep hill battle. Knowing where to find helpful tips, markets and other information to make the journey smoother can help ease the way. There's a website at Today's Teen Writer that works hard to help teen writers learn the ins and outs of the writing world. This site also has interviews from some of the top authors including New York Times Best Selling Author Jay Asher, the incredible writer of the novel Thirteen Reasons Why, one of the most powerful young adult novels I've ever read.
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Labels: Jay Asher, New York Times Best Selling Author, teen writers
Monday, August 31, 2009
Mimicry Writers
I will sometimes mentor new writers who ask for help. Over and over again they tell me the same thing. They want to write like their favorite author. They ask 'Why am I not as good?' I tell each one the same thing. You need to spend some time working on your craft. A writer will write.
If God had wanted you to write like Debbie Macomber (a very lovely author I've had the pleasure of meeting in person) then He would have made you Debbie Macomber. But He didn't. And if He gave you the talent to write, it means He wants you to write as YOU using your life experiences, your personality.
So don't be a mimcry of another author. Be an original and bring the world the stories God intended you to write.
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Labels: Debbie Macomber, fiction writing, God, mimicry
Sunday, August 30, 2009
Writers Running From Success
Tomorrow is the last day you have to get anything done in the month of August. September is arriving. Did you get all your good intentions completed for August? If you don't set goals, both short term and long, you might be the reason why you aren't where you want to be in your writing career.
You want to know how to run from success? Don't set goals. Don't set deadlines to complete your projects. In other words, procrastinate. Why reach for success when you can merely dream about it? Did you know that one of the reasons why some writers never achieve their dreams is because they place 'road out ahead' signs and block their way?
"Well, I'm not that good in grammar or spelling..." ROAD OUT AHEAD
"I can't find the time to write, I'm so busy with other things..." ROAD OUT AHEAD
"My writing isn't as good as Mrs. Big Famous Author..." ROAD OUT AHEAD
I'll let you in a little secret. I am a born again procrastinator. What's that mean? It means I was the president of procrastinators and then I realized a few years ago that my life was marching forward full steam ahead even if I accomplished nothing. If I spend hours playing Majongg (LOVE that game!) or surfing the Internet reading the news (I'm a news junkie) then I've filled valuable 'could have reached for a dream' hours with mundane, non important things. Things that won't change my life or someone else's. Will stand in the way like a road out sign.
I made the determination that I would never let a day go by without writing something that moves me closer to my goal.
Now I'm going to get real personal. I'm so determined to keep that goal and grab my dream (hitting the New York Times Best Seller list) that I've written in the bathroom at almost 3 AM in the morning, so bleary eyed I could barely see the notebook I had in hand. But the day had been filled with things I had to take care of and that 3 AM time was all I had left. I've written when I was so heartbroken I thought I would pass out from the pain. I've written when I was sure the only thing I could excel at writing was a grocery list.
Next week will come and go. So will next month. And the month after that. Then it will be a new year. A new decade. Where will you be with your writing then?
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Labels: fiction writing, goals, procrastination, September
Saturday, August 29, 2009
Can You Hear Me?
I read a blog at http://stephanieshackelford.com/blog/index.php/2009/08/ that asked if anyone was listening. The blog has a soft, beautiful pastel color and a gorgeous picture at the top. The writing is great. But like all writers feel, it's not enough simply to write. We want to share our work with others.
When you have a blog and you want others to read it, it's not enough to post and hope that alone will draw in readers. You have to get the word out there. You have to market your blog. Tell people you're out there. Post on blogs, go on a blog tour, talk it up. Put the power of social marketing to work for you. Set up a Twitter account about your blog, get a Facebook. You have to do the work to get your name out there to the public. Promotion is the key here.
If God wants you to write the blog, can't He bring the people in? Absolutely, but the Bible is filled with example after example of where God told the people to do something and until those people took that first step, God didn't act. So take the first step. Start what He's told you to do, then step out and tell others about it.
You never know who's reading your blog especially if they don't comment. You don't know that your words won't inspire someone or help a hurting heart. You just never know. So keep writing even if it seems you're the only person in blogland.
Friday, August 28, 2009
Dreaming...
Fall is on the way! It's one of my top two favorite times of the year. I love the way all the trees turn golden or crimson leaves into a covering for the ground. I love the chill in the air, the little nip that lets you know summer is officially over.
I look forward to hot chocolate while cuddled beneath a quilt on the sofa. I love the smell of woodsmoke in the air and I love the planning and cooking that goes into holiday meals.
I have this dream that someday I'm a New York Times Best Selling Author and I live in a large home with lots of trees surrounding it. I have an office with a floor to ceiling window and from there, I can write and watch the beautiful world God created.
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Labels: author, dreaming, fall, fiction writing, hot chocolate
Thursday, August 27, 2009
The Truth About Heroes Even in Christian Fiction
Creating heroes can be a lot of fun for a writer. Or it can be as fun as cleaning the bathroom. It all depends on if you know your hero, know his motivation, where he came from, what his beliefs are. Where does he stand on certain issues? I've seen a few beginning writers create perfect heroes. They had no flaws at all.
The character came across flat and unrealistic because men (and women-I'm not male bashing) are human beings. Without the flaws that make them human, no one can relate.
I see this more often in Christian fiction than anywhere else. The men are created to act like superheroes, breathe through life untainted by the trials us mere mortals have and save the day.
No, no and no! A hero MUST be flawed. That doesn't mean you have to make him a dirtbag, but people have to be able to relate. How do you create realistic heroes? Research what men struggle with. Even Christian men. Yeah, it's not always pretty, it's not always accepted in Christian fiction, but it IS the truth. Where did writers start to believe that Christian men didn't have the same faults? True, God's grace is sufficient to help overcome struggles, addictions etc. but they do exist. Creating heroes that are flawless gives out the expectancy in some readers that somewhere 'out there' the perfect male is waiting for her.
I remember author Francine Rivers catching flak because of her Christian fiction books depicting flawed characters she'd based on stories from the Bible. The characters weren't always likeable, they didn't always do the right thing. But they came across as real.
When you create your hero, don't be afraid to let him fail. Pick him up, dust him off and THEN let him succeed.
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Labels: fiction writing, Francine Rivers, heroes